Yesterday  Room 11,12,10 went on the ferry to tiritiri matangi island. We looked at native birds and trees. The hot sun made me thirsty and sweaty like nothing.

Writing Prompt ;Nehusita

We Are Learning To: use a beginning, middle and an ending in our writing. Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.

Beginning: Who are the characters?  Memory Gordan Vedel Sive Mya Angel Hanatia Jolie Alicia Jazire What is the setting? Auckland Once upon a time there were some people called Memory,Gordan,Vedel,Sive,Mya,Angel,Hanatia,Jolie,Alicia,and Jazire.They lived at a place called Auckland and they will stay at there room listening to music on there speakers.Then they will go to mission bay and play scorer and touch rugby on the field.

Middle: A problem. Learn more about the characters.      When they were playing touch rugby there were a problem because someone got tackled and that was Alicia so then she cried and it was Sive that tackled her and she hit her head at the floor so she felt ill. Then when she hit her head the ball got lost so then we were locating the ball but it wasn’t lost Gordon went with the ball down to the beach. Memory has black and blonde hair and she likes to listen to music, And Gordon likes to make people cry. Vedel likes to play with little kids like Mya’s little baby cousin, Sive likes to push people of stuffs like Mya. Mya likes to play touch rugby and look at new stuffs,Hanatia likes to play tiggie.Angel likes to give people punch like boys,Alicia likes to play games.Jazire likes to take selfie on her netbook,and Jolie likes to play moviestarplanet.

End: The problem is fixed. Happy endings! It turned out her head wasn’t injured  and Gordon also said sorry to her.Finally Gordon was playing very nicely to Alicia they all jumped into the beach.